Tuesday, May 16, 2017

Cold Water Story

On a sunny day in Duncan bay. Me and my friend jumped off the wharf. Running at speed I launched off the edge and splashed in the water for a second I froze like an iceberg then started to move again then swam towards the steps on the wharf. I jumped onto the steps my togs soaked with water I lined up for another go.


My body shivering like a rocking boat I stumble towards the edge and flop off the edge.Then  Splash! As I hobble up the steps I put my hand on the step and cut my finger on the wire we had to go home, and sat in front of the fire.

The End

3 comments:

  1. Hoooeee. That second sentence sure was a long one!

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  2. Think this is your best work yet. Love it!

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