Tuesday, May 16, 2017

Cold Water Story

On a sunny day in Duncan bay. Me and my friend jumped off the wharf. Running at speed I launched off the edge and splashed in the water for a second I froze like an iceberg then started to move again then swam towards the steps on the wharf. I jumped onto the steps my togs soaked with water I lined up for another go.

My body shivering like a rocking boat I stumble towards the edge and flop off the edge.Then  Splash! As I hobble up the steps I put my hand on the step and cut my finger on the wire we had to go home, and sat in front of the fire.

The End


  1. Hoooeee. That second sentence sure was a long one!

  2. Think this is your best work yet. Love it!